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Rewritten Screenplay

Postby lazarus07 on Thu Mar 26, 2009 9:56 pm

I already have rewritten the original script written by Sir Dagway. I only actually formatted the script, then edited some typos. The script is in pdf form, so you'll need a PDF reader. I archived it, since the forum does not allow the pdf file extension, so you'll also need a file archiver to open the file.

Edit:
I have edited some of the errors in the script, but maybe still not fully grammar error-free. Can someone do some proofreading here, and to cite grammatical errors and some wierd sequences?

Edit2:
Several edits made to the screenplay. Totoo pala sinasabi nila... Matagal gumawa ng screenplay... Dahil sa mga edits!

Edit3:
Another rundown of edits. Added specific shots for the Christianization of Humabon and his Wife. Also added different formats of the screenplay.

Edit4:
Recent changes can now be viewed in the Subversion Repository.
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Last edited by lazarus07 on Sun May 17, 2009 7:29 pm, edited 6 times in total.
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Re: Rewritten Screenplay

Postby dagwayjack on Fri Mar 27, 2009 11:38 am

Lazaruz, ok na ang script except for some grammatical lapses. Pero hindi naman ito grammar class at yung original ko ay marami naman nito hehe. so pabayaan na natin ang grammar except for one na kailangan talagang i-correct kasi very crucial ito sa script. baka ma-mis-interpret:

page 1 line 11: WATCHMEN should be WATCHMAN. isa lang sia. take note of the succeeding line. --"His" eyes are fixed..."

Isa lang talaga dapat ang gagawa ng action na to. kung meron iba siang kasama, pabayaan na natin ang director ang mag-decide nito.
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Re: Rewritten Screenplay

Postby lazarus07 on Fri Mar 27, 2009 12:14 pm

I already corrected a few before I released that version. Meron pa palang natitira... Haha. Habang ginagawa ko kasi yan, iniimagine ko yung scene. Pag may parang mali, ineedit ko ng onte. Actually, we need to correct most of the grammar errors. Mahirap na, baka magkagulo pa sa interpretation.
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Re: Rewritten Screenplay

Postby marwin on Fri Mar 27, 2009 5:12 pm

......napuputol ung spark :|
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Re: Rewritten Screenplay

Postby lazarus07 on Fri Mar 27, 2009 11:50 pm

Ganyan talaga yan. You can still read it naman e.
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Re: Rewritten Screenplay

Postby lazarus07 on Sun Apr 05, 2009 7:34 pm

Bump! Uploaded latest edits. Go download it. I would also like to ask for some suggested shots for the Blood Compact of Magellan and Humabon. Thanks.
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Re: Rewritten Screenplay

Postby lazarus07 on Sun May 17, 2009 7:29 pm

*BUMP*
I have edited some typos and angles in the script. It can be viewed now in the SVN Repository. View SVN Repository

This is the first few commits to the SVN Repository, which I hope you test out. Note that I use Celtx in writing the scripts, as well as the exports. To know more about Celtx, visit their Website.
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Re: Rewritten Screenplay

Postby MrPerlishells on Sun Mar 07, 2010 9:47 pm

I'm trying to do the story board no matter what. I'd like to know the resource where it says native dwellers have filed colored teeth. The people ate food off of the land and probably don't consume any sugar or processed foods. This would make their teeth stronger than ours. They would still heave Pearly white teeth.

How can I submit my Celtx file to the SVN?
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Re: Rewritten Screenplay

Postby MrPerlishells on Sun Mar 07, 2010 10:41 pm

This is a file I've started doing awhile ago. I'm redoing the drawings on paper. I'll update it when I finish more of it and I get my hands on a scanner. If not then I'll have to take a picture or of my drawing with a digital camera.
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Started doing the story board.
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Re: Rewritten Screenplay

Postby marwin on Fri Mar 12, 2010 11:47 pm

so may SVN na tayo??? :shock: tagal ko nawala...

@lazarus buhay ka pa pala :shock:

Teka panu tong celtx????? maybayad kaya!!!! :cry:

edit: nvm kita ko na hehe 8-)
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